BBC Bitesize Music Needs To Do Better

These are the first three paragraphs taken from the BBC Bitesize website on the origins of the blues. It's full of problematic words and phrases which do not give an accurate representation of how the blues was created, who created it, and the historical context it sits in. Even though the bitesize website is intended to consolidate information, there are ways to do this which avoid racist language and sweeping generalisations.

Here are the three paragraphs in their entirety: